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School Improvement
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Assessments |
Kansas
Curricular Standards | Math and Reading
Resource Handbook
Academic Improvement Mission
In an effort to focus on enhanced student performance, the staff of
GMS has developed a plan to engage students in high quality improvement
activities in reading and math throughout the school year. This plan will
be implemented at varying levels in all classes across the curriculum.
Our Commitment to Every Childs Academic Success in Math
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Teach math standards in all math classes.
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Speak common math vocabulary in every content.
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Incorporate math computation in every content.
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Apply problem solving strategies in every content.
Our Commitment to Every Childs Academic Success in Reading
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Teach reading standards in all reading classes.
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Speak common reading vocabulary in every content.
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Reinforce vocabulary skills in every content.
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Strengthen comprehension in every content.
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Integrate reading and writing in every content.
Click one of the links below to download the state
Adequate Yearly Proress (AYP) for that year.
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ASSESSMENTS
Throughout the school year, students will be required to take one formal
assessment that provides the data GMS uses in the school improvement process.
This assessment is an important indicator of student progress and may determine
future courses students are required to take.
State Assessments are administered during the months of March and April.
During the 2009-2010 school year, all seventh grade students will complete
the math, reading and science state assessments. All eighth grade students
will complete the math, reading and social studies state assessments. These
assessments indicate how well students are mastering the Kansas Curricular
Standards that make up each subjects curriculum.
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KANSAS CURRICULAR STANDARDS
The State Board of Education established standards, benchmarks
and indicators for all students in the subject areas of reading, math,
science, social studies and writing. The standards and benchmarks are general
statements of what students should know and be able to do at various grade
levels. The indicators are the specific skills students must master and
these vary among grade levels. At RGMS, that state curricular standards
are taught to all students, and all students participate in state assessments
as a means to measure mastery of indicators.
State Math Standards
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Standard 1: The student uses numerical and computational concepts and procedures
in a variety of situations.
a. Benchmark 1: Number Sense
b. Benchmark 2: Number Systems and Their Properties
c. Benchmark 3: Estimation
d. Benchmark 4: Computation
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Standard 2: The student uses algebraic concepts and procedures in a variety
of situations.
a. Benchmark 1: Patterns
b. Benchmark 2: Variable, Equations, and Inequalities
c. Benchmark 3: Functions
d. Benchmark 4: Models
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Standard 3: The student uses geometric concepts and procedures in a variety
of situations.
a. Benchmark 1: Geometric Figures and Their Properties
b. Benchmark 2: Measurement and Estimation
c. Benchmark 3: Transformational Geometry
d. Benchmark 4: Geometry From an Algebraic Perspective
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Standard 4: The student uses concepts and procedures of data analysis in
a variety of situations.
a. Benchmark 1: Probability
b. Benchmark 2: Statistics
State Reading Standards
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Standard 1: The student reads and comprehends text across the curriculum.
a. Benchmark 1: The student uses skills in alphabetics to construct
meaning from text.
b. Benchmark 2: The student reads fluently.
c. Benchmark 3: The student expands vocabulary.
d. Benchmark 4: The student comprehends a variety of texts (narrative,
expository, technical, persuasive)
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Standard 2: The student responds to a variety of text.
a. Benchmark 1: The student uses literary concepts to interpret and
respond to text.
b. Benchmark 2: The student understands the significance of literature
and its contributions to various cultures.
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STATE ASSESSMENTS and TESTED
INDICATORS
Kansas students are expected to know selected skills in math and reading
and to display those skills at different levels of complexity depending
upon their grade level. To see that students are meeting the education
standards set by the Kansas State Board, tests were developed from the
standards adopted for the state of Kansas in the areas of math, science,
reading, social studies and writing. The knowledge and skills assessed
by the seventh and eighth grade may not have been learned entirely in those
grades, but are expected to have been part of every students studies in
the grades prior to and including grades 7 and 8.
7TH GRADE MATH TESTED INDICATORS
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Add and subtract decimals.
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Multiply and divide four-digit numbers by two-digit numbers, including
decimals.
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Add, subtract, multiply and divide fractions and express the answers in
the simplest form.
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Find percentages of rational numbers (a rational number is any number that
can be written as a fraction).
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Identify and extend a variety of patterns.
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Find a mathematical relationship between ratios, proportions, and percents
and how to solve for a missing value in a proportion.
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Evaluate simple algebraic expressions by replacing variables (whats unknown)
with given numbers and finding the value.
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Recognize that shapes have specific characteristics and be able to identify
those characteristics.
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Find the perimeter (distances around the outside) and area (square units
of space inside) of various shapes.
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Use given measurement formulas to find the surface area of cubes (the area
of all six sides of a three-dimensional object) and the volume of rectangular
prisms (the amount of space inside a box).
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Demonstrate the ability to read and make vertical and horizontal tables
and charts; line, circle, and picture graphs; scatter; stem-and-leaf; and
box-and-whisker plots.
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Understand and demonstrate a variety of ways to represent algebraic expressions.
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Use equivalent representations for fractional operations.
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Write expressions and equations based on real-world problems. An expression
does not contain an equal sign, but an equation does.
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Determine the actual dimensions and/or measurements of a two-dimensional
figure represented in a scale drawing.
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Find and explain misrepresentations of data that distort the appearance
of the data, and demonstrate how changing the vertical and horizontal parts
(axis) of a graph can distort the appearance of the graph.
8TH GRADE MATH TESTED INDICATORS
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Understand and explain what the result is when a positive number is multiplied
or divided by a number greater than zero and less than one.
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Understand and explain what the result is when a number other than zero
is multiplied by zero.
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Identify all the subsets of the real number system to which a given number
belongs. For example, natural numbers are those numbers we count with;
whole numbers are the counting numbers plus zero; integers include zero,
whole numbers and their opposites; rational numbers are those numbers that
can be expressed in a fraction; irrational numbers are those numbers that
cannot be expressed as fractions. A given number may belong to one or more
of these subsets.
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Add, subtract, multiply and divide using positive and negative whole numbers.
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Use order of operations when computing with rational numbers (understand
to work first within grouping symbols, then find powers, then perform multiplication/division
from left to right).
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Find the solution to an equation.
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Use the Pythagorean Theorem, which states that if a triangle is a right
triangle, then the sum of the squares of the two legs is equal to the square
of the side opposite the right angle.
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Given the graph of a line, be able to list points on the line.
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Recognize that the points on a graphed line (ordered pairs) are solutions
to the equation that creates the line.
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Find the length of a given side of a figure drawn on a graph when given
two points on the graph.
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Determine the probability of two non-related events happening at the same
time, or one after the other.
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Determine mean (the sum of the values divided by the total number of values),
median (the middle value), and mode (the most frequent value) for a given
set of numbers.
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Explain how problems are solved using mathematical properties, including
the following: commutative (numbers can be added and multiplied in any
order resulting in the same answer); associative (when a series of numbers
is added or multiplied, the order in which the values are added or multiplied
doesnt affect the result); distributive (when multiplying a number by
the sum of numbers, you can multiply each of the numbers by the factor
first then add); substitution (a number may be substituted for a variable
or equivalent quantity); identity for addition (when 0 is added to another
number it doesnt change the value of the number); identity for multiplication
(when a number is multiplied by 1 it doesnt change the value of the number);
additive inverse (a number plus its opposite is 0); multiplicative inverse
(a number multiplied by its reciprocal is 1).
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Solve real-world problems that involve one and two steps using addition,
subtraction, multiplication, and/or subtraction of numbers that are positive
and negative with decimals, fractions, percents, and the use if pi.
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Use symbols, expressions or equations to represent unknown quantities in
solving real-world problems using addition, subtraction, and multiplication.
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Represent a linear set of data in its numerical, tabular, graphical, and
symbolic forms.
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Determine if a specified mathematical model (graphical, algebraic or geometric)
is an accurate representation of a given real-world situation.
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Understand that congruent figures are the same exact shape and size, their
corresponding sides are the same lengths, and their areas are the same.
Use that knowledge to solve real-world problems.
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Understand that similar figures are the same exact shape and their corresponding
sides are proportional in length and their areas are proportional to the
increase in the sides. Use that knowledge to solve real-world problems.
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Make predictions based n the theoretical probability of a simple event
in an experiment or simulation.
7TH & 8TH READING TESTED INDICATORS
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Use clues from the surrounding words to determine the meaning of an unknown
word or phrase.
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Understand how adding beginnings or endings to words change the meaning
of the words.
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Correctly identify similes (comparison of two unlike things); metaphors
(using a word denoting one type of object in place of another as a means
of drawing a comparison between the two); analogies (pointing out the similarities
in particular aspects of two things that are otherwise not alike); hyperbole
(extreme exaggeration); onomatopoeia (the use of words whose sound suggests
the meaning); personification (representation of a thing or object as a
person or by human form); idioms (an expression that does not mean what
its literal translation says); imagery, and understand their meaning.
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Understand how the features located in text, such as titles, graphs/charts,
maps table of contents, boldface and italic type, glossary, index, headings,
captions, sidebars, bulleted lists and numbering can assist in understanding
the meaning of the text.
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Make a prediction or draw a conclusion based on the material read.
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Explain how various aspects of the text (characters traits and motives,
themes, problem-solution, cause-effect relationships, ideas and concepts,
procedures, viewpoints, authors purposes) are alike or different.
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Understand how one or more things can have an effect on the outcome of
another.
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Restate the main idea of a text and important details from the text in
a logical order.
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Identify the topic, main idea(s), supporting detail, and theme(s) in a
text.
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Explain how the authors purpose for writing a text influences the authors
style of writing.
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Identify the details that point to the conclusions drawn by the author.
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Understand the difference between fact and opinion and recognize the different
types of propaganda (advertising, media, politics, warfare, bias, stereotypes).
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Describe the different aspects of major and minor characters, including
physical traits, personality traits, feelings, etc., and explain how those
traits influence the characters interactions with other characters.
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Describe the setting for the storyincluding environment, time of day or
year, historical period, situation, and placeand explain the importance
of the setting to the story.
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Describe major and minor events in a story and explain how one event gives
rise to another.
TEXT TYPES
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Narrative It is often fiction. It tells a story and contains well-developed
characters. It contains a setting and a plot with a problem and a resolution.
It contains a theme. Vocabulary is used to enrich understanding. It may
be written in first, second, or third person. The passage makes sense when
read from beginning to end. Examples: drama, diaries, excerpts from novels,
fables, fantasies, folk tales, historical fiction, legends, mysteries,
myths, novels, personal narratives, plays, poetry, mysteries, science fiction,
short stories, tall tales
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Expository It is nonfiction in which the author seeks to explain or inform.
The information can be verified as true. Common structures within expository
text include description, definition, classification, comparison/contrast,
cause/effect, problem/solution, sequence, or a combination. It is subject
oriented to focus on a specific topic. Examples: autobiographies, biographies,
essays, book reports, brochures, graphs and charts, interviews, journals,
lists, newspaper/magazine articles, research papers, speeches, textbooks
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Technical It is nonfiction in which the author gives information to the
reader than may be used to perform a task. The material to be read may
include explicit steps to follow or the steps may be implied in a graphic.
Sentences are commonly shortened or fragmented and numbered or bulleted
lists are commonly used. It uses dictionary meaning of words and focuses
on an identified topic. It is organized in a logical and orderly way. Examples:
brochures, classified ads, directions, floor plans, forms, graphs, charts,
how-to guides, instructions, job preparation manuals, maps, menus, recipes,
schedules, transcripts, warranties
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Persuasive It is nonfiction in which the author intends to convince the
reader to adopt a particular opinion or to perform a certain action. It
attempts to solve a problem by invoking change. It is written to convince
the reader to adopt the writers point of view. It focuses on a central
purpose and sometimes relies on propaganda and sarcasm. The author tries
to appeal through reason, emotion, endorsement of an influential figure,
testimonials, citing authority, statistics. Examples: Advertisements, book
reviews, charitable campaign appeals, commercials, debates, editorials,
letters to the editor, movie critiques, political campaign literature,
editorials
WAYS TO BUILD A BETTER VOCABULARY
Students understanding of meanings of words encountered in a text
is often crucial to the overall comprehension of the text. There are several
ways to figure out the meaning of unfamiliar words. A students first reaction
should be to look at the word itself for familiar word parts. Next, a student
should examine the context for clues. Third, a student could see whether
word origins might help. Last, a student should utilize a reference material
for an exact meaning.
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Word Parts - Words can often be broken down into smaller parts.
If the meaning of the smaller parts is determined, students gain a better
understanding of the whole word.
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Prefixes - A prefix is a word part added to the beginning of a base word.
Each prefix has a general meaning. (For example, the prefix pre means
before. Knowing this would help a student determine that pretest means
a test before material is taught or preschool means school attended
before public school.)
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Suffixes - A suffix is a word part added to the ending of a base word.
Each suffix has a general meaning. (For example, the suffix ant means
one who or the performer of a task. Knowing this would help a student
determine that assistant means one who assists.)
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Roots - A root is a base upon which a word is built. Often students can
begin to understand the meaning of an unfamiliar word if they can determine
the base root.
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Context Clues - These are other words or phrases to help with the understanding
of a new word. These words or phrases are built into sentences around the
difficult word. If students become more aware of the words around the difficult
words encountered in their reading, they will save themselves many trips
to the dictionary. Instead, they will be able to make logical guesses about
the meaning of words.
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Definitions - The sentence itself defines a word. The tip off for this
type of clue is often the form of the verb be (am, is, are, was, were).
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Synonyms - A second, more familiar word that is similar in meaning to the
unknown word is stated in the text.
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Antonyms - A second, more familiar word that is opposite to the unknown
word is stated in the text.
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Comparisons - An unfamiliar word is used in a comparison with a familiar
word that has a similarity or likeness to the unknown word. Comparisons
are signaled by words such as like or as.
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Contrasts - An unfamiliar word is used in a contrast with a familiar word
that has differences to the unknown word. Contrasts are signaled by words
such as but, on the other hand, unlike, on the contrary.
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Restatements - An unknown word is restated in other words. Demonstrative
pronouns such as this, that, these, those may indicate restatements.
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Items in a Series - An unknown word could be part of a series of words
that are more familiar to help.
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Cause and effect - When one event triggers, or causes, another event, meaning
of unknown words can be gained by studying that cause/effect relationship.
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Inferring Meaning - Not every word in context is signaled by key words
or clues. Many times the student must piece together hints in the context.
Using the hints, a student can make educated guesses, or inferences, about
the meaning of the unknown words.
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Word Origins - English began with a prehistoric language called Intro-European.
Over a long period of time, several other languages came from this same
source causing many similarities between the English language and other
parts of the world. Great numbers of words entered English from Latin,
Greek, early Germanic languages, and French. If students become more aware
of word origins, they can begin to determine the meanings of unknown words.
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Borrowed Words - The process of borrowing words from other languages continues
today. For example, the words canyon and ranch are Spanish and the word
canary is African.
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Words from Names - New words may be based on the name of a person or place.
For example, herculean, which means having great strength, comes from
the Greek myth about Hercules.
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Clipped Words - New words are shortened forms of existing words. For example,
cab was clipped from cabriolet.
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Combined Words - Words may be put together from two existing words or word
parts. For example, brunch is a blend of the two words breakfast and
lunch.
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Words from Sounds - Words can imitate sounds. Examples include chirp, creak,
and hush.
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Reference Tools - There are many reference tools available to help determine
the meanings of unfamiliar or unknown words. Some of these include the
thesaurus, glossaries, encyclopedias, etc. The most common tool is the
dictionary. By taking a closer look at words through reference materials,
a greater understanding of words and the various contexts, connotations
and meanings can be gained.
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TYPES OF ANALOGIES
| Part to Whole |
battery : flashlight : : hard drive :
computer |
| Cause and Effect |
fatigue : yawning : : itching : scratching |
| Person to Situation |
mother : home : : teacher : school |
| Synonym |
obese : fat : : slender : thin |
| Antonym |
poverty : wealth : : sickness :
health |
| Geography |
Chicago : Illinois : : Denver :
Colorado |
| Measurement |
pound : kilogram : : quart : liter |
| Time |
March : spring : : December : winter |
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Strategic/Successful Readers
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Immature/Struggling Readers
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READ
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DO NOT READ
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Before Reading
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Activate prior knowledge
Develop purpose for reading
Use titles and/or illustrations to predict |
Start reading without preparation
Read without knowing why
Do not look through the selection in advance
Read without considering approach |
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During Reading
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Focus attention
Anticipate and verify predictions
Monitor their comprehension
-know comprehension is occurring
-know what is to be understood
Use fix-it strategies when lack of understanding occurs
Remain mentally active through visualizing or questioning
to understand
Organize and integrate new information
Persevere with difficult information, inadequate information |
Are easily distracted
Read to get done
Do not realize that they do not understand
Dont know what to do when lack of understanding occurs
Are mentally passive, decoding-oriented readers
Do not recognize important vocabulary
Have a tendency to give up |
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After Reading
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Reflect on what was read
Summarize information read
Seek additional information from outside sources
Feel success is a result of hard work and efficient thinking |
Do not reflect on what was read
Do not read beyond prescribed source
Work alone, not able or fearful to share
Feel success is a result of luck, and failure is a result
of teacher bias |
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| PREFIXES |
SUFFIXES |
ROOT WORD |
amphi both, around
amphibious, amphitheater
anti against
antibiotic, anti-abortionists
auto self
autobiography, automatic
bene well, good
benefit, benefactor, benign
bi two
bikini, bicycle
bio life
biology, biography
co together
coauthor, coexist
com together with
commune, combine
de to make less, off, apart
deduct, degrade, deactivate
dis not, not any
disbelieve, disrespect
equi equal
equality, equitable
e/ex out
exit, elusive, evacuate, extinguish
fore before
forerunner, forefathers
geo earth
geography, geology
in not
inactive, inappropriate
inter between, among
interrupt, interfere
mal bad, badly
malign, malignant, malicious
mis wrong, bad
misbehave, misprint
mono one, single
monogamy, monologue
non not
nonsense, nonabrasive
omni everywhere, all
omnipresent, omnipotent
per through
permeate, permit
poly many
polygon, polygamy
post after
posterior, postpone, postscript
pre before
preview, precede, pretest
pro forward
proceed, promote
re again
return, reunite
semi half
semiannual, semicircle
sub under, below
substandard, submerge, submarine
super greater, beyond
supernatural, superstition
trans across
transpire, transcontinental
uni one
unilateral, unity
un not
unacceptable, unlikely |
able/ible (adj.) able to, can do
likeable, flexible
acy/acity having the quality of
democracy, tenacity
ance/ancy action, process, state
assistance, allowance, truancy, defiance
ant (adj.) performing agent
assistant, servant
ary/ery/ory (n.) relating to, quality
dictionary, bravery, dormitory
ate (v.) cause, make
liquidate, segregate, inculcate
ation changes a verb to a noun
creation, starvation
cian (n.) having skill or art
musician, magician, beautician, physician
cide to kill or cut
homicide, genocide, suicide
cle/cule - small
particle, miniscule, molecule
crat to rule
democrat, aristocrat
cy (n.) action, function
hesitancy, prophecy, normalcy
dom (n.) quality, realm, office
kingdom, wisdom, freedom, dukedom
ee/eer one who
employee, volunteer, auctioneer
er more
wiser, harder, stronger
er/or (n.) one who
dancer, rider, baker, teacher, doctor
escent becoming
adolescent, convalescent, fluorescent
est most
wisest, hardest, strongest
ful/full (adj.) quantity (n.)
playful, cupful, careful
fy (v.) to make or cause to become
purify, magnify
hood (n.) order, condition
manhood, womanhood, brotherhood
ic (adj.) nature of, like
metallic, heroic, poetic, acidic
ice (n.) act of, time of, condition, state
justice, malice, service, novice
ism forms nouns
criticism
ist someone who is
conformist, cyclist
ize turns n. and adj. into verbs
modernize, hospitalize, dramatize
less (adj.) without
fearless, motherless, careless
let little
booklet, pamphlet, bracelet
logy/ology study of
biology, psychology, anthropology
ly (adj.) having the quality of, like, manner of
manly, motherly, miserly, carelessly
ment changes verbs to nouns
entertainment, amazement
ness state, quality
kindness, happiness, friendliness
or one who
donor, orator, tractor, doctor
ory/orium (n.) place where
observatory, planetarium, factory
ship (n.) office, state, skill
friendship, authorship, dictatorship
some (adj.) like, apt, tending to
lonesome, threesome, gruesome
tude (n.) state of, condition of
attitude, gratitude, multitude
ward (n.) in the direction of
eastward, forward, backward
y (adj.) inclined to, tend to
cheery, crafty, faulty |
acri/acer - sharp, bitter
acrid, acute, acid
act - do
action, react, enact
amicus - friend
amicable, amiable
aud - hear
audience, auditorium, audible
cred believe
credible, credit, incredible, discredit
chron time
chronology, synchronize, chronicle
dic speak
predict, dictate, contradict
flu - to flow
fluent, superfluous, affluent
fid - trust, have faith
fidelity, confidant, diffident
greg - flock, herd
congregate, segregate
luc/lumen light
lucid, elucidate, luminous
pathos feeling
apathy, sympathy, empathy
pug fist
pugilist, repugnant
plac - make calm
placate, placid, complacent
spec/spic - to see, observe
conspicuous, perspective, spectacle
tract - pull, drag
tractor, distract, contract
vid see
video, provide, evidence |
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UPIC PROBLEM SOLVING METHOD
U Understand the problem (What is the problem asking me to do?)
P Pick a Strategy (What do I need to do in order to solve the problem?)
I - Implement the strategy (Do the work.)
C Conclude (Answer the problem and ask yourself if your answer makes
sense.)
Sample Problem
If a baseball player gets 43 hits in 126 at-bats, what is his batting
average?
U Find the players batting average
P # of hits divided by # of at-bats = batting average
I 43 divided by 126 = 0.341269841
C Batting Average = 0.341
(43/126 is a little over 1/3 so
my answer makes sense)
MATH VOCABULARY WORDS
Numerator- number of equal parts in a whole (top number of a
fraction)
Denominator- number of parts you are dealing with (bottom number
of a fraction)
Equation- a math sentence that contains an equal sign
Exponent- the number that expresses how many times the base
is used as a factor
Inequality- a comparison of two expressions using: <, >,
?, or ?
Mean - the average of a set of numbers
Mode- the number that occurs most often in a set of numbers
Median- the middle number in a set of numbers if the numbers
are in order
Range the highest number minus the lowest number
Variable- a letter that represents a number
Factor- a number that divides into another number without a
remainder
Multiple- the product of two numbers
Sum- answer to an addition problem
Difference- answer to a subtraction problem
Product- answer to a multiplication problem
Quotient- answer to a division problem
Parallel lines that never intersect
Perpendicular lines that form a right angle
Prime Number a whole number with exactly two factors, one
and itself
Composite Number a whole number that has more than two factors
CONVERTING METRIC AND STANDARD UNITS
Distance
1 kilometer = 1,000 meters
1 kilometer = 100,000 centimeters
1 kilometer = 1,000,000 millimeters
1 meter = 100 centimeters
1 meter = 1,000 millimeters
1 centimeter = 10 millimeters
1 mile = 1,760 yards
1 mile = 5,280 feet
1 mile = 63,360 inches
1 yard = 3 feet
1 yard = 36 inches
1 foot = 12 inches
Mass
1 kilogram = 1,000 grams
1 kilogram = 1,000,000 milligrams
1 gram = 1,000 milligrams
1 ton = 2000 pounds
1 pound = 16 ounces
Volume
1 liter = 1,000 milliliters
1 gallon = 4 quarts
1 gallon = 8 pints
1 gallon = 128 fluid ounces
1 quart = 2 pints
1 quart = 32 fluid ounces
1 pint = 16 fluid ounces
ORDER OF OPERATIONS
Step 1 Grouping symbols (parenthesis)
Step 2 Powers
Step 3 Multiplication and Division from left to right
Step 4 Addition and Subtraction from left to right
MATHEMATICAL FORMULAS
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MULTIPLICATION TABLE
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40
|
44
|
48
|
|
5
|
0
|
5
|
10
|
15
|
20
|
25
|
30
|
35
|
40
|
45
|
50
|
55
|
60
|
|
6
|
0
|
6
|
12
|
18
|
24
|
30
|
36
|
42
|
48
|
54
|
60
|
66
|
72
|
|
7
|
0
|
7
|
14
|
21
|
28
|
35
|
42
|
49
|
56
|
63
|
70
|
77
|
84
|
|
8
|
0
|
8
|
16
|
24
|
32
|
40
|
48
|
56
|
64
|
72
|
80
|
88
|
96
|
|
9
|
0
|
9
|
18
|
27
|
36
|
45
|
54
|
63
|
72
|
81
|
90
|
99
|
108
|
|
10
|
0
|
10
|
20
|
30
|
40
|
50
|
60
|
70
|
80
|
90
|
100
|
110
|
120
|
|
11
|
0
|
11
|
22
|
33
|
44
|
55
|
66
|
77
|
88
|
99
|
110
|
121
|
132
|
|
12
|
0
|
12
|
24
|
36
|
48
|
60
|
72
|
84
|
96
|
108
|
120
|
132
|
144
|
Analytical Rating Guide Summary
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Ideas & Content
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Organization
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Voice
|
Word Choice
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Sentence Fluency
|
Conventions
|
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5
|
5
|
5
|
5
|
5
|
5
|
Clear, focused and interesting
Insightful
Relevant details
Balance: main ideas stand out
Writer in control
Writer shapes ideas and makes connections |
Compelling
Moves the reader through the text
Lead and conclusions are strong
Pacing well-controlled
Transitions smooth
Reader hardly has to think about the organization
Sequencing logical and effective |
Writer speaks directly to the reader
Expressive, engaging
Honest; written from the heart
Can sense the person behind the words
Language is natural
Tone/voice seem appropriate |
Interesting, precise, and natural
/Words are specific, accurate; just right
Imagery is strong
Powerful verbs
Language is natural
Expression is fresh/appealing |
Easy flow and rhythm when read aloud
Sentences well built
Strong and varied structure
Fragments used for effect; dialogue sounds natural
Sentences display and effective combination of power
and grace
Fragments and dialogue work well |
Good grasp of standard conventions
Paragraphing is sound
Punctuation is smooth
Spelling generally correct (difficult words)
Requires only light editing to polish for publication
Writer may manipulate for effect |
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3
|
3
|
3
|
3
|
3
|
3
|
Clear and focused
Development limited
Some trouble moving from general observations to specifics
More information is needed to fill in the blanks
Main points lack originality |
The order or structure moves the reader without undue
confusion
Lead not strong; conclusion not satisfying
Connections are fuzzy
Sequencing is logical
Pacing is fairly well controlled
Organization does not seriously get in the way |
Writer not genuinely engaged or involved
Moments of amusement, surprise, etc.
Writing hides as much of the writer as it reveals
Writer weighs words for distance or to avoid risk |
Language is functional
Lacks punch; does get the message across
Words are correct and adequate, but not precise
Writer avoids experimentation
Writer uses redundancy or cliché, but does not
rely on them |
Lacks rhythm and grace
More businesslike or mechanical
Not literary
Good control over simple sentence structure
Favors a particular sentence patter
Reader has to hunt for clues to link sentences |
Reasonable control over limited conventions
Spelling usually correct (easy words)
Terminal punctuation almost always correct
Paragraphing attempted
Errors somewhat distracting |
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1
|
1
|
1
|
1
|
1
|
1
|
No clear sense of purpose or central theme
Information is very limited or unclear
Text is repetitious; reads like a collection of random
thoughts
Writer has yet to define the topic or sense of direction
to guide development |
Lacks clear sense of direction
No identifiable sense of structure
Sequencing, if it exists, needs work
No real lead or conclusion
Transitions not clearly defined
Hard to understand main point |
Writer seems indifferent, distant
Monotone
Writing is flat, lifeless or mechanical
Functional; no attempt to move or involve the reader
Writer does not connect with audience |
Limited vocabulary
Language vague/abstract
Persistent redundancy
Uses clichés as crutch
Words used incorrectly in more than one or two cases
Writer does not select words to help reader |
Difficult to follow or read aloud
Choppy, incomplete, rambling, awkward
Sentences do not sound natural
Sentence structure obscures meaning
Little or no real variety in sentence length or structure |
Errors in spelling, punctuation, usage and grammar
repeatedly distract the reader
Requires extensive editing to polish for publication
Paragraphing is missing or incorrect
Reader must first decode, then reads for meaning |
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